Manuscript
Story edit 5- latest edit
(Page 1 is the page behind cover, Page 2 is copyright page, Page 3 is title page. Story begins on Page 4)
Page 4:
It's breakfast time, Sophia! (show Sophia playing with toys, cot in the background)
Page 5 (opposite Page 4):
Chop! Chop! Chop the bananas for Sophia.
Page 6 (page turn, so when people turn the page, they see Sophia in her high chair with fun large words saying Come. Sit and eat!):
Come. Sit and eat! (show Sophia in her high chair)
Page 7 (opposite Page 6):
After breakfast, Sophia's cousins come to play.
Page 8
It's snack time! (3 foods)
Banana gets chopped (into spears for Sophia and bite sized pieces for Willow - show this) and mashed (show this)
Page 9:
Chopped banana for Sophia and Willow. Puree for Goldie. (filler illustration page, show all 3 girls going to sit and eat)
Page 10 (page turn!!): Come. Sit and eat!
Page 11 (opposite Page 10):
After eating Sophia and her cousins play in the garden (show the girls saying "sit and eat" to toys, and then napping)
Page 12-13:
It's lunch time! (5 foods)
Cucumbers get peeled and chopped. Eggs get scrambled. Vegetables get pureed. (really show how all foods are prepared, even if they may not be mentioned)
Page 14 (page turn!!):
Come. Sit and eat! (Show girls eating their foods + milk for Goldie)
(have chew chew swallow swallow somewhere on the page)
Page 15 (opposite Page 14):
“chew chew swallow swallow”
Page 16
Play play play till it’s time to eat again.
Page 17 (opposite page 16)
Wonder what’s for dinner?
Page 18-19 (page turn)
Veggie muffin and yoghurt! Yum!
(Yoghurt scooped, veggie muffin on plates)
Come. Sit and Eat!
Page 20-21
Spot illustrations showing the girls giggling and chatting during dinner
Page 22-23
We don’t giggle or chat with our mouth full!
Page 24-25
Chew chew, swallow swallow.
Sit and eat!
Sit and eat!
(Show girls happy sitting and eating and one shows mouth full and one shows mouth empty with spoon going into a big open mouth )
Page 26-27, 28-29
Interactive pages - have Goldie, Sophia, Willow with mouths open and show all different types of food so people can match. Show ages of the kids again.
Page 30
References
Page 31
Answer key to interactive pages, acknowledgements, author/illustrator contact details
Page 32 - endpage
(Page 1 is the page behind cover, Page 2 is copyright page, Page 3 is title page. Story begins on Page 4)
Page 4:
It's breakfast time, Sophia! (show Sophia playing with toys, cot in the background)
Page 5 (opposite Page 4):
Chop! Chop! Chop the bananas for Sophia.
Page 6 (page turn, so when people turn the page, they see Sophia in her high chair with fun large words saying Come. Sit and eat!):
Come. Sit and eat! (show Sophia in her high chair)
Page 7 (opposite Page 6):
After breakfast, Sophia's cousins come to play.
Page 8
It's snack time! (3 foods)
Banana gets chopped (into spears for Sophia and bite sized pieces for Willow - show this) and mashed (show this)
Page 9:
Chopped banana for Sophia and Willow. Puree for Goldie. (filler illustration page, show all 3 girls going to sit and eat)
Page 10 (page turn!!): Come. Sit and eat!
Page 11 (opposite Page 10):
After eating Sophia and her cousins play in the garden (show the girls saying "sit and eat" to toys, and then napping)
Page 12-13:
It's lunch time! (5 foods)
Cucumbers get peeled and chopped. Eggs get scrambled. Vegetables get pureed. (really show how all foods are prepared, even if they may not be mentioned)
Page 14 (page turn!!):
Come. Sit and eat! (Show girls eating their foods + milk for Goldie)
(have chew chew swallow swallow somewhere on the page)
Page 15 (opposite Page 14):
“chew chew swallow swallow”
Page 16
Play play play till it’s time to eat again.
Page 17 (opposite page 16)
Wonder what’s for dinner?
Page 18-19 (page turn)
Veggie muffin and yoghurt! Yum!
(Yoghurt scooped, veggie muffin on plates)
Come. Sit and Eat!
Page 20-21
Spot illustrations showing the girls giggling and chatting during dinner
Page 22-23
We don’t giggle or chat with our mouth full!
Page 24-25
Chew chew, swallow swallow.
Sit and eat!
Sit and eat!
(Show girls happy sitting and eating and one shows mouth full and one shows mouth empty with spoon going into a big open mouth )
Page 26-27, 28-29
Interactive pages - have Goldie, Sophia, Willow with mouths open and show all different types of food so people can match. Show ages of the kids again.
Page 30
References
Page 31
Answer key to interactive pages, acknowledgements, author/illustrator contact details
Page 32 - endpage